billy's Photoblog
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Posted by bronzebilly u.k. (Barry,Vale of Glamorgan, United Kingdom) on 4 February 2007 in Transportation and Portfolio.
come on train I've finished my shift
badala from Leiria, Portugal
Simple and superbly executed shot. Wonderful light and contrast.
4 Feb 2007 11:33pm
@badala: I look forward to your comments--thanx--billy
Ken McCoy from Orlando-Daytona Beach, FL, United States
I like the color tones and composition in this one!
5 Feb 2007 3:52am
Kody Whiteaker from Pullman, United States
I'm not sure what type of a camera your using, but i would make sure your using it on it's manual setting(you might be in this pic but like i said, it's hard to tell). Now on to the picture:
Theres a few things id like to suggest. When your thinking about your compostition, think in thirds. its always good to never divide your picture in half. it detracts from the image. an inch up or down and your golden. i would say up because that unfocused branch in the bottom right is hurting your pic. nice sunset tho.
One obvious thing is mae sure your picture is in focus.
Your actual content is nice, kind of like "who knows whats gonn a happen in the future" type feel to it.
I'm not trying to be mean I'm trying to help make you a beter photographer, so take what i say with a grain of salt.... When I finished my first assignment for the first paper i worked for, my editor walked up to me and said"did you take anything that didnt suck?" first time i met the guy....
overall: 3/10
5 Feb 2007 4:15am
@Kody Whiteaker: thanx for your comments Kody is refreshing to take on real comments--3/10 though--it's not a bad picture for a digi compact--billy
adalove from Alcala de Guadaira, Spain
Lovely sky colours and shot! The railway adds a very nice deep sensation!
5 Feb 2007 12:28pm
Visions by Dean Christopher. from Cardiff, United Kingdom
YAY...memories from the Hood!!!
Awesome shot dad...1 of your best!
16 Feb 2007 11:17pm
@Visions by Dean Christopher.: hey ho--spar--billy--ecaftraf
